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I -hate- the new DeviantART setup. Hate it. 
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You sought out to destroy,
Something that was beautiful.
Back then I was just a boy.
Seeking something beautiful.

Looking back on what was lost.
It used to be so wonderful.
You took your grip of something soft.
Used to be so wonderful.

You promised me
This was normal…

Nothing’s wrong when nothing’s said.
What once was pure, now is dead.
Your words were knives, nothing more.
The children are bleeding on the floor.
You promised me this was normal.

It was warm for October.
The room was just too hot.
You locked out the others.
Because it was too hot.

You made us a promise.
Everybody did it.
You made us promise.
Not to say we did it.
You promised me this was normal.

The threat was there, we would die.
We do it now, or dead we lie.
Spoken vows, locked doors.
Victimized by a fucking whore.
You promised me this was normal.

You fucking promised me!
Promised
I'm okay guys. Just felt somewhat..I don't want to say inspired. Just needed something to break through a cold streak with my writing. And the only thing that seemed to come out with good enough emotion was something kind of personal that I don't really bring up.
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THEendOmega
Tom
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On a mission....


To find a local cinnabon....


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jemishiback Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
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jemishiback Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
He was happy to talk to you
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jemishiback Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
I saw many beautiful and unique things you
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jemishiback Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
Hi guys, I jemishiback
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hello Jemishiback. 
Nice to meet you. 

Thank you for your comments. I see you're from Iran. Are you need to English? 
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jemishiback Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Filmographer
You're too kind
Thank you so much if you help me to help you if you need me I'll be done in
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. And I will be sure to find you if I need to. 

:) 
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22Hussars Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for the watch!
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!
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MattVoscinar Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you for becoming a member of #DA-Poetics. I hope you enjoy the group!
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem, I'm glad to have been invited :) 
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ChariMud Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Thank you for the comments, and watch, all that shizzle. I feel so special to be liked by an amazing artist!
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No biggie :D 


:iconohuplz:

I'm less of an artist than most of the people on here. But thank you for the kind words :3


You're welcome for that shizzle too. 

s'all good
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Skkon Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhhh my gosh I hit the random deviant button and came to your profile right? so I start scrolling down as the page loads and then I scroll back up and see your deviantID
YOU MY FRIEND HAVE SCARED THE LIVING CRAP OUT OF ME
Have a nice day.
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hahaha well, hey, it did its job! :D

You have a good one!
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Kiriphorito Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for the llama! :llama:
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Like :icontupacplz:.

its no :iconbiggiesmallsplz:.
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Le-Rainbow-Wolf Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Arza: here's what I'm trying to say,
"United we Stand, Divided we fall"
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okay Benjamin.
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Le-Rainbow-Wolf Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Arza: ^^; sorry, just a lesson I've learned
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A good lesson
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Le-Rainbow-Wolf Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Windra: ...! Oh sh!t.... uhm, yeah, I've needed to apologize to all the sh!t I've done to you and the one who calls you her sister.... I've been a Tad Vengeful and I thought you were Bezzulbub.... seriously.. I'd understand if I was going to Hell for hurting you as I have.... I didn't mean it as it may said.... it in comparison is like How Gabriel tends to loose his mind sometimes... ^^; we need to talk more?
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You've done nothing. As I said before. Fear not what presents no threat.

You don't bother me at all.
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Le-Rainbow-Wolf Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Windra: k, as a note, have you heard what's coming in the 577th turn? (44 billion years) I won't speak it, just think and write it, I know it's a cautious bisness)
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THEendOmega Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Too cautious if you ask me. I've lost track, whose turn is it , yours and mine?
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